I like it. Terrific imagery - I especially love the bit
So take
us into these wooden hollows, where you
will sap us into molasses, where I can spend my
winter softly seeping across texts
Wonderful. This is very nice. Keep writing - I'd love to read more!
(Oh, there's just one little spot of grammar trouble... a "your" that should be a "you're" I believe... Still great!)
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